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1999 Winning Poems

Grades 1st place 2nd Place
1-3: Hannah Jahnke- The Fall Blow Alison von Rohr - Sunset
4-6: Ryan Jane Jacoby - Rolling Waves of Sapphire Sean McCready - Peaceful Night
7-9: Rachel Hip-Flores - Littleton, Colorado Adria Blount - My Name
10-12: Alexander Gustafson - Women of the Odyssey Lisa Shaw - Zamas
Teachers: Chris Queally - Words of Love Linda Rief - In New Hampshire. . .

 

Grades 1-3

 

First Place: Hannah Jahnke

The Fall Blow

In the fall
There’s a big ball
With dancing and singing and laughter

The leaves will be falling
The geese will be calling
Because the winter comes after

As the animals settle
Mom turns on the kettle
And we all put on our sweaters

It’s getting cold
But fall is like gold
And it’s pumpkin weather

The apples are sweet
And we’ll say trick or treat
While the cold winds blow

The leaf piles are higher
So we’ll sit by the fire
And wait for the first snow.

(Hannah Jahnke is a third-grade studentat the Happy Hollow School in Wayland, MA.)

Second Place: Alison von Rohr

Sunset

Sunset by the seashore
The dark blue water
All the sea creatures
The waves are lapping
On the sand
You and I are standing on the sand
As the last dot
Of the sun fades away
The sky grows dark
One cloud catches
The last ray of the sun
Then the stars come out
Then the moon comes out
Like a silver ball.

(Alison von Rohr is a second-grade student at the Happy Hollow School in Wayland, MA.)

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Grades 4-6First Place: Ryan Jane Jacoby

Rolling Waves of Sapphire

concealed in thick fog
foam collecting at the
water’s edge

radiant buoys bob
on the ever shifting waves
calling to fisherman
through the now
rising mist

We awaken, in our
water bed, in the
murky deep
dozing among
miles of mountain chains

vibrant sun resting
on the shoulders of the horizon
clearing
the haze, silencing
the fog horn

Beach grass dancing
on the
rolling dunes
obscuring the retreating water
from view
holding back secrets
known only by
us critters
of the sea

Heat at its peak
baking all at its
mercy
sand crabs seeking
cover of the
damp sand
breathing holes
popping
after every surge
of salty water

scuttle of gulls
scavengers of the sea
depriving sunbathers
of their

onion rings
gloating at
their menacing
gazes

fortresses of
sand castles
guarding precious
scallops and
mussels

from the hungry high tide
mob of vacationers
vanish
as does the
intense glare of the
sun

wispy cumulus clouds
replaced by
harsh nimbus shadows
heavy with rain

hints of moonlight
through the
darkened sky
peaking through

infrequent gaps

shimmering sphere of silver
pulling the ocean
out to sea
revealing wonders of
oysters, starfish
pebbles
and salt softened

sea glass

retreat of crustaceans
departing to our
continental shelf
gradually sloping
into the ocean floor

ripples of rain
pelting the surface
I lie contented
in my sandy berth
head on my greenish brown
claws
dreaming of the
approaching dawn

(Ryan Jane Jacoby is a sixth-grade student at Wellesley Middle School in Wellesley, MA.)

Grades 4-6Second Place: Sean McCready

Peaceful Night

Crickets chirp
Locusts sound
To welcome twilight
The edge of night.

Locusts sound
The friendly pillow my weary head has found
The edge of night
Dancing shadows take flight.

The friendly pillow my weary head has found
Dew begins to caress the ground
Dancing shadows take flight
Sparkles of stars slip into sight.

Dew begins to caress the ground
Peaceful waterfall splashes sound
Sparkles of stars slip into sight
Trees whisper, “It’s all right.”

Peaceful waterfall splashes sound
Shades of violet all around
Trees whisper, “It’s all right.”
Welcome, dusk, Welcome, night.

(Sean McCready is a sixth-grade student at the North Salisbury School in Salisbury, MD.)

 

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Grades 7-9

 

First Place: Rachel Hip-Flores

Littleton, Colorado

I vaguely remember being
a part of someone's dream once
nightmare, nightmare.
I vaguely remember not being here
my mother and blankets
my room

I won't need to remember this
won't need to remember
the boys
the trench coats or guns

this clost or metal
shards in my arm
         in my head
     in my heart

the SWATS carrying
                            julia asleep

                       and I vaguely remember
being a part of someone's dream once.

(Rachel Hip-Flores is an eight-grade student at Conackamack Middle School in Piscataway, NJ.)

Second Place: Adria Blount

My Name

     my name is Adria
Adria, a black cloak, hiding strength and power
Adria, a black panther, sleek, lovely, until it attacks
a word from a mystic language
slang: genius; psychopath
Adria, sunny, silly, solemn
born on a sunny day at noon
My secret identity-Natasha
born Natasha on a sunny day at noon
Natasha
Na-taashha
the wind in the reeds on the banks of the Nile
Natasha
Natasha, masked and cloaked, a rapier at her side
Natasha, exciting
but Adria is. . .
operatic, special
my own heroine
Adria, masked and cloaked
Adria, a rapier at her side
Adria, in her own skin
not Natasha
Me
Adria

(Adria Blount is a seventh-grade student at Conackamack Middle School in Piscataway, NJ.)

 

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Grades 10-12

First Place: Alexander Gustafson

Women of the Odyssey

 

Gray-eyed Athena, daughter of Metis and Zeus
Was goddess of wisdom and a champion of truth.
She urged Zeus to listen to Odysseus’ plight
And soon to Kalypso, Hermes took flight.

But, oh, let’s not hasten too fast through this tale
Of Odysseus’ journey, there’s much to unveil.
His first female contact with danger so near
Was on the Isle of Aiaia where he stayed for one year.

A dread goddess named Circe with magical wine
Turned Odysseus’ men into pitiful swine.
But Hermes warned Odysseus and gave him some “moly”
So Circe’s bold plan soon became a mere folly.

When she turned the men back at Odysseus’ plea
They begged her to let them set sail on the sea.
But Circe insisted to Hades they go
For a consult with Teiresias, a prophet below.

In Hades, Odysseus saw his mother’s lost soul
While awaiting her drink from the darkest blood bowl.
Antikleia soon knew him, answering questions galore
But wondered what brought him to the Underworld’s shore.

From Hades to Aiaia, Odysseus went
For Elpenor had died, oh such forlorned lament.
The Circe gave details of a much safer way
To avoid all the creatures under whom men fell prey.

But although she did warn them, the wind drove them on
To the isle of the Sirens with their deadliest song.
Odysseus packed beeswax in all his men’s ears
While his crew tied him down to allay their own fears.

Once safe from the Sirens, engrossed had they been
Watching Charybdis when old Skylla moved in.
She quickly ate six of Odysseus’ men
While the others rowed fast to escape from her den.

Now Skylla had six heads with two sets of teeth
And continuously searched round for something to eat,
But shining Charybdis was dangerous too
For, if pulled in her whirlpool, no god could un-do.

The men ate some cattle and met their demise
While Odysseus drifted under storm-ridden skies.
At last, on Ogygia, he finally found land
But fell to the mercy of Kalypso’s hand.

She promised to make him immortal you see
If he would just love her and never go free.
As seven years passed, he remained on the isle
Where he shed many tears, but never a smile.

Athena sent Hermes to liberate him
From the grasp of Kalypso’s powerful whim.
The gods felt it time that he should be free
So Kalypso helped build him a ship to set sea.

Soon Poseidon took notice of Odysseus’ ship
And made perilous waves that would devastate it.
But, birdlike in nature, Leukothea did come
With a cloak in her beak for Odysseus to don.

With the magical cloak as a means to survive
He landed in Scheria barely alive.
Left washed up on shore all tattered and torn
All feared him but one on that fateful morn.

Nausikaa, the daughter of a Phaiakian king
Was sought by Athena to help the poor thing.
She asked her attendants to come to his aid
With clothing and olive oil as a pomade.

The Phaiakians steered Odysseus to Ithaka’s shore
Where Athena poured mist to disguise him some more.
He sprang and stood upright and looked all about
Where he had landed, he hoped to find out.

Disguised as a shepherd, Athena came near
To enlighten Odysseus that Ithaka was here.
She then made him look like a beggar to see
What had happened to the suitors and Penelope.

Once inside the palace, Penelope did ask
One of her servants to perform a kind task.
Eurykleia then bathed Odysseus’ worn feet
And noticed a scar from the boar that he beat.

Great joy filled the old nurse as she recognized
Odysseus’ person even with his disguise.
She wanted to share the great news and event
But Odysseus warned her she must be silent.

Soon word of a contest was openly spread
To determine which suitor Penelope would wed.
Twelve axe-heads she claimed must be shot with his bow
The one to accomplish it would be her beau.

But the suitors were killed by Odysseus you see
Who then hastened to find his Penelope.
He revealed his identity and asked for her hand
She, not certain of him, had more proof to demand.

Odysseus, hurt deeply, nonetheless did agree
And described the strange thing ‘bout their bed and the tree.
Penelope then knew that Odysseus was real
Together at last, they’d survived their ordeal.

 

(Alexander Gustafson is a twelfth-grade student at Essex High School in Essex Junction, VT)

 

Grades 10-12

Second Place: Lisa Shaw

Zamas

 

A constant wind lifted the sand into the air,
It taunted the water into waves

That collided with the rocky point in bursts of flair.
The spiky palm roof of Zamas provided the shade
From the shirt pulling hands of the persistent sun,
Inside the ultramarine and candle yellow cave.
The smell of empanadas and tortillas resounded in the stomach like drums.
I ate guacamole by the spoonful,
Savoring its salty spice and crab red tomato crumbs.
Three walls were open to the view of gulls,
Froth spray and baked curls of seaweed,
A stray dog scratched at the sand like a charging bull
Reminding me of frantic urban speed,
I felt the ground beneath my toes, and thought to breathe.

(Lisa Shaw is a twelfth-grade student at Champlain Valley Union High School in Charlotte, VT.)

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Teacher Contest

 

First Place: Chris Queally

Words of Love

There is a line about her light
that Desdemona lying sleeping
near to dying sleeping lightly
never hears her husband saying
early in the final act.

Sotto voce, from his soul;
it is the cause, and she is it.
Perhaps he’s leaning over her
or kneeling on or by their bed;
a taper or a lamp in hand.

These images of light and dark
bond black, white, husband, wife
life and death together. Actor, actor
on the stage or if you’re reading,
dark traces on a pale page.

Either way, she never has or gets
to hear him say if he but once
put out her light,
I know not where is that Promethean heat
That can thy light relume.

I introduced this scene in class
and said I loved the word relume
and wondered why the playwright
never chose to use the word again
and why it never had caught on.

But how can you love a word?
said the dark haired girl
in the second row
to no one special.

(Chris Queally is the Head of the English Department at Thornton Academy in Saco, ME.)

Second Place: Linda Rief

In New Hampshire. . .

“Life is measured in our connection to others.”

—Jim Robbins

In New Hampshire the autumn air
is green pear crisp.
Maple trees turn apple red
oak pumpkin orange and hickory
summer squash yellow.
If you listen hard
you can hear the leaves
turn color.

Tonight, as you sliced the last of the summer squash,
you heard words—Kosovo. . . Serbs. . . slaughter. . . ethnic Albanians. . .
women. . . noses sliced from their faces. . . women. . . ears
sliced from their heads. . . women. . . fingers
chopped from their hands. . .
Your heart thumps to your throat.

You fill your plate with summer
and swallow autumn.

(Linda Rief teaches seventh- and eighth-grade English at Oyster River Middle School in Durham, NH.)

 

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